A really lovely piece… Well written.
Behind closed eyes,
Reality dies,
Imagination screams,
On our deaf dreams..
The light, it bends,
The colors blend,
The silence starts,
And the worlds end.
You sweat and bleed,
Your fear is free,
You start to shake,
And then you wake…
And you remember nothing,
Just emptiness…
You just put into words what I couldn’t. It just fits.
Thanks…. Encouraging comment
very nice indeed. We always wonder what our dreams mean and sometimes we are happy that it is only a dream and forget about it.
Hmmmm…. Don’t know about you, but I’ve had dreams I wished weren’t JUST dreams.
i absolutely love the lines “Imagination screams/On our deaf dreams..”
Thanks